The Making of Dr. Truelove, by Derrick Barnes
Barnes, Derrick (2006). The Making of Dr. Truelove. NY: Simon Pulse. 240 pages.
This book starts off hott! In the first scene, sixteen-year-old Diego Montgomery is getting ready to have sex with his girlfriend Roxy. Both are stripped down to their undies and Diego's already busted one nut. Just as they're about to do the deed, Diego loses it in his pants and is humiliated. In spite of Roxy's assurances, Diego is embarrassed that he couldn't perform (or, AHEM, that he performed too soon), and stops taking her calls. When he finds out that Roxy is being pursued by a local high school basketball star headed for the NBA, Diego and his best friend J. concoct a plan to get Roxy back. Assuming the nom de plume "Dr. Truelove," Diego authors sex and love advice on an eponymous website. J.--a wealthy (and horny) pot-smoking hustler--promotes the site and soon the two boys are secret stars.
A number of plots kind of battle for attention in this novel: the first involves Diego and J.'s creation and promotion of the Dr. Truelove site, the second details Diego's struggle to win Roxy back. While both of these arcs are meant to play off of each other, more often than not they seemed like parallel stories. In the end, it's not really the Truelove site that works its magic on the would-be lovers, instead, it's like the fictional site becomes a sort of a comedic mouthpiece for the author and all the real action happens outside the web.
While some might argue that a popular novel with Black characters and some racy dialogue would automatically make it a piece of "urban" or "street" fiction, I think this novel (which meets all of the above criteria) is more of a sort of feminine romance than a piece of street writing. Folks who read the first chapter will definitely be mislead; the book doesn't get any sexier after that first incident. Which brings me to my primary critique: the novel starts off hot (and in a style reminiscent of street lit), but then it kind of turns into what School Library Journal called a Cyrano-like story with an emphasis on romance and relationship rather than physical intimacy. Oddly, the novel even seems to contradict itself when Diego hears that his romantic rival is planning on "hitting" Roxy and this news sends him into a moral tailspin. For all its promise of frankness (the intro. chapter, the promise of unedited Dr. Truelove advice), the novel ends up taking a kind of surprising platonic turn by its end.